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This is my dream bike.

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“This is my dream bike.”

  1. February 4th, 2015 at 5:42 am      Reply takeea2012 Says:

    Hi Ferris,

    your dream bike is surely fictional, realistic and awesome! I was wondering how the fire was making the bike go at full speed and what’s the thing at the very front that looks like a grinder? But I can see some awesome imagination in there!

    I think that you could have improved this post by making the size a bit larger and describing the piece a bit better, which will come in handy with learning. But other than that, I see a piece that Albert Einstein could have invented.

    So well done!
    Keep up the good work and see you at school/class.
    By Takeea2012, bye!


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